Hey this is a my blurb I had made for a book idea I had please leave a comment to let me know if this is publishing worthy for your eyes. Thank you.
If you are interested in reading the story its on fanfiction.net search Detective seer and you'll find it there. The story is done in first person so if you read it please leave a comment its only 1-12 chapters just disregard 13 because its the same blurb/query your going to read now so please enjoy and yes this is my work I have a account on fanfic.
When Kida mortis entered Frost High, she had come in hoping for an education, to make her father proud, and a chance to bury the hatchet of her past. What she did get was a slap in the face from the '"Wealthiest most prestigious private schools this side of New York."' After a full year of dropping off the radar, Kida is back. But changed. She's healthy but smaller, has a cynical sense of humor and developed a dark personality for her fellow man or in this case…rich man.
Here in school, the rich kids reign supreme, climbing up the ladder without even taking the first step; doing whatever pops into their tidy minds, and getting away as the teachers, staff, and board praise, encourage, and guild the future overdosers, over-hyped, overrated offspring of their family rank and status. Everyone gets a piece of the good life…
Except for Kida. She is the outcast. The lesser embodiment of the glitz and glam. Once upon a time she had tasted, glimpsed, as well as savored that world by the very people who took her hand and opened a new world for her. But no more. Kida has escaped that world but is bonded to the hand that caressed her check so long ago, now she's back. And this time she crushes the hand that caressed her and is leaving her mark… One vision at a time.